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Used, reused, recycled
wasting away every moment, hour, year.
Package opened, can dented, dreams tainted
unpure, uncertain, unwilling.
It started to feel good, then began
all over agian.
lifeless and breathing, unloved, unwanted
and rejected.
Worthless and beautiful
is how you made it feel
unseen, unwritten, underneath.
A box marked fragile
dropped just too many times.
Thanks for the delivery.
wasting away every moment, hour, year.
Package opened, can dented, dreams tainted
unpure, uncertain, unwilling.
It started to feel good, then began
all over agian.
lifeless and breathing, unloved, unwanted
and rejected.
Worthless and beautiful
is how you made it feel
unseen, unwritten, underneath.
A box marked fragile
dropped just too many times.
Thanks for the delivery.
it's a poem. enjoy or don't, whatever floats ur boat...
and it will be better then that one i hope.
oh, and in my creative writing class last year at RWU people thought it was about losing virginity... i don't see it but whatever.
and it will be better then that one i hope.
oh, and in my creative writing class last year at RWU people thought it was about losing virginity... i don't see it but whatever.
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yeah it could be about sex, but i might not have thought that if I hadnt read it with that in mind. In any case its really good.